What I found to be surprising was what Erick stated, “I would
really like to hear something that would make your idea awe me”, as this was
something I had already thought was done. Although, this was extremely insightful
and useful. Nothing is ever perfect and being able to poke holes in an idea is
what takes it to the next level. This only tells me to try harder. To address
this feedback, I have stated in my new pitch that my service is capable of
assisting with an inevitable part of life – loss. I hope with this new pitch I can accomplish what
Erick stated was missing. Thanks for the Feedback Erick! It was extremely
helpful!
Hi Cesar! Very good job with your elevator pitch! I like that you kept eye contact and sounded very compelling for your business. I also liked that you did not just stand there but moved as well since I think having some sort of hand gestures helps the audience convey you interest in your topic. Your business model is very good as well and I still think your idea is great for those that want a home and need a place to stay that are elderly. Good job!
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