Since there was no negative feedback on my last elevator pitch
it was difficult to find something to change; however, I did challenge my self
to attempt something new. What I changed was my pitch’s duration time with elevator
pitches being described as fast and since the assignment stated that speed is important
this seemed like a good adjustment. I was able to convey my thoughts with
direction and speed while maintaining a clear idea.
Hello Cesar! Very good elevator pitch! I really liked how you kept eye contact and were very engaging with your movements. I think it is important to make it feel like a conversation which I felt when you were doing your pitch. I love your idea and I look forward to learning more about it and the different activities you will have for the seniors. Very nice job overall!
ReplyDeleteHi Cesar, very good eye contact and confidence. I really like the background since of your video, professional attire, and I can see your passion. Perfect timing, too. You nailed this elevator pitch and I am sure this is a great opportunity for you to pitch this idea to any investor. Good luck and great job!
ReplyDeleteHey Cesar, I think you did a wonderful job with this pitch! You were calm and collected for the entire duration of the elevator pitch; this made it very easy to follow along with what you were saying. Additionally, the backdrop was a cool and interesting element that caught my eye. I can tell that you are passionate about this and have put a lot of time and effort into it. Great work!
ReplyDeleteHi Cesar, I really like this elevator pitch the most from all your previous attempts. The background and lighting allow for an ease of professionalism without impacting what you are saying and helps concentrate on your speech. The speech sounds very professional and the dialogue is tuned well. I can hear your passion through your body language and it shows well, great pitch!
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